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Congratulations Marcel educate youth to nature you can start you in the printing, go Gutenberg: 19:

Hello Marcel, your plug is designed for young kayakers who discover the plans and rivers and the life that abounds. Just two small points, actually, it lacks a little trim frame type border very late but it is perhaps only an impression because the record is here alone. And "gray bubble" we do not really know what it is enlarged and even reading the text is impossible, but there again if we had the sheet in A4 format before me this would surely different. Otherwise I like the clear, entertaining, readable and understandable to all, The pictures speak for themselves, informational text without being too long. : 3:: 4:

: 3:: 4: It's original and it changes! Bravo and thank you we learn by watching! : 1:: 6:

: 1: Marcel, I like the presentation fresh and fun, it does lack a little edging finishing ... For Fei, because I guess it will be on paper for students ... : 18:

+: Personally, I find it very well but I put a little coaching very end ... and then still two points:

-:The photos are beautiful but not in the sense of reading, it would be good practice to achieve horizontal symmetry ... and then the text says on the left?

I like the layout and information on this record, but it lacks an entourage.

I think if you ask the question, you did not simply photograph a book page. YES then your layout is attractive. : 3:

I really like this layout a bit chaotic! The page is pleasant to read, well documented, I am: 4: It just needs a black border to contain the whole: 18: